A decade in the dark, taking part in a dream

Pretty self-explanatory. Leave a comment here if you want to critique the way I play Muraki. Let me know if I'm doing okay, or failing harder than a balloon underwater, either way, please let me know. I'll take whatever you got, but try to limit yourself to constructive comments, please. Nothing productive comes out of telling me that I suck and that I need to go die in a fire.   



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